Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Creative Writing [The train of Winter world]

In 2100, the whole of world became winter. So, whole of  people want to ride the train to survive on Earth. Actually, the train is the only method to survive in Earth. Without riding the train people will die because it is too cold. Only 500 people can ride the train at one time. So, all of people fight with one another.


After 3 days that start to became winter, 500 people rode a train. The train has many rooms and there are two groups of rooms, Above the train is for rich people's room. There are kindergarten, bar, game room, health club and high quality of dormitory. However, behind the train is for poor people's room. There aren't kindergarten, bar, game room, health club and high quality of dormitory.

[ Above the train]

- Kindergarten -

-Bar-

-Game room-

-Health Club-

-High Quality of Dormitory-



Xeno who lives in behind the train wants to go to above the train and get engines that moves the train. Xeno thinks if he gets engines, he can manage all of the train. So, he prepares to attack above the train with co-worker, Octopus.


However, Blanka who lives in above the train, has curiosity about behind the train. So, one day, she goes to behind the train secretely and meet Xeno. Xeno takes away Blanka. But Blanka says to Xeno, "I want to travel this room"and Xeno guides her. After that, Xeno falls in love with Blanka and Blanka also, too. But, Blanka has to go back to above the train. They promise that they meet every 12.p.m because 12.p.m is sleeping time to everyone who rode in the train. And they meet everyday.



However, they are discovered by the Octopus who is friend with Xeno. Octopus shocks at situation. But, Octopus is best friend with Xeno. So he hides the truth.
Anyway, they heard that Korea has four seasons to Octopus. Octopus says them, escaping from the train and live there. But, Xeno has to get engines for poor people. Blanka says him to escape quickly when the train passes in the Korea.




However, Xeno decides to get engines and tells her to achieve it. Blanka spills tear and goes back to above the train. After 3 days, Xeno, Octopus and poor people start to attack above the train and succeed to get engines that Xeno wants everyday.



And...


- Click here for Ending 1 -
- Click here for Ending 2 -
- Click here for Ending 3 -





4 comments:

  1. Your story shows creativity and imagination and you have used photos supporting your story. It may be useful to introduce your characters a bit more at the beginning of the story and while each of your endings are different - I suggest more detailed information.
    Good work - keep it up!

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